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Head Shaving, Grooming & Care => Miscellaneous => Topic started by: crazy.irish.celt on August 02, 2009, 01:32:02 PM

Title: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
Post by: crazy.irish.celt on August 02, 2009, 01:32:02 PM: I spent all day Saturday at my friend's In-Home studio laying some drum tracks for songs he has written. While I was there, he offered to let me lay down a track or two for myself. Here is the one I feel has the most potential.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=978940

This is a short two-minute demo of a song I call "Questions". I laid down all of the instrumentals for this track. I improvised all the parts around a simple chord progression: only used one take for each, so it's not perfect. Also, this has very minimal mixing and has NOT been mastered, so it COULD sound a lot better.

Let me know what you think. If you guys think it's worth finishing, I'll probably write out some real parts for it and really turn it into a tasty jam. Please bear in mind that I am a drummer first and foremost :px , so the guitar parts are by no means amazing. I could do better if I actually practiced an arranged solo.
Title: Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
Post by: aarrggh on August 02, 2009, 01:37:47 PM: TOO ME IT SOUNDS GREAT ! O0
Title: Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
Post by: Antimidas on August 02, 2009, 01:47:00 PM: I'd buy that for a dollar.
Title: Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
Post by: crazy.irish.celt on August 02, 2009, 01:49:16 PM: Quote from: aarrggh on August 02, 2009, 01:37:47 PM
TOO ME IT SOUNDS GREAT ! O0 B@%d

Glad to know have so much faith in me considering you couldn't even hear the song... :/O
Title: Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
Post by: aarrggh on August 02, 2009, 01:51:24 PM: YOUR LINK WORKED ON MY END ! ! ! :/O :/O :/O :/O :/O :/O :/O :/O :/O
Title: Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
Post by: Antimidas on August 02, 2009, 01:52:14 PM: Aarrggh got BUSTED! :)
Title: Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
Post by: Antimidas on August 02, 2009, 01:57:17 PM: Something is amiss here. Now I only see one link in the entire thread. Hmmm. Methinks we timed it perfectly after he got approved and heard the song. D#tG3t
Title: Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
Post by: aarrggh on August 02, 2009, 01:59:28 PM: I think this whole thread should be deleted and stick too our " BRITNEY SPEARS MUSIC" !!!!!!!!!
Title: Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
Post by: Antimidas on August 02, 2009, 02:01:21 PM: Ooo! That was toxic! :D
Title: Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
Post by: crazy.irish.celt on August 02, 2009, 02:14:20 PM: Quote from: aarrggh on August 02, 2009, 01:59:28 PM
I think this whole thread should be deleted and stick too our " BRITNEY SPEARS MUSIC" !!!!!!!!!

Yeah, well... I think we should delete your face. ^)$$
Title: Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
Post by: Antimidas on August 02, 2009, 02:17:23 PM: Now boys! kn*% Make nice.
Title: Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
Post by: aarrggh on August 02, 2009, 02:29:51 PM: I love that song by BRITNEY SPEARS ~"Ooops...I did it again" ~ ! Now thats a work of art ! O0

(https://www.slybaldguys.com/smf/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi30.tinypic.com%2Fwbqhih.jpg&hash=688effdb7ad1a72046f08c0e40af3cf2c4eb5169)
Title: Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
Post by: Timmay on August 02, 2009, 04:10:58 PM: aarrggh HUSH! Song was good dude. Like I said in your pm i sent you , I dont think it needs any words. GREAT JOB!
Title: Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
Post by: aarrggh on August 02, 2009, 04:22:22 PM: O`Timmj ~what would we ever do without you--I said it sounded great the rest of the posts were just jibber- jabber--Maybe we can hook up with one of the moderators and arrange some kinda group hug with all who posted here......Whatcha think !............ :-*
Title: Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
Post by: Tyler on August 02, 2009, 05:11:52 PM: I liked the instrumental.
Title: Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
Post by: Timmay on August 02, 2009, 09:26:05 PM: i dunno aarrggh..you might smoother us. lol
Title: Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
Post by: aarrggh on August 02, 2009, 10:43:08 PM: Hey , don`t worry i was just covering my #@*:X by trying too make alls well and make it a hap hap happier place............. :D
Title: Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
Post by: PBurke on August 03, 2009, 03:32:31 AM: Quote from: aarrggh on August 02, 2009, 10:43:08 PM
Hey , don`t worry i was just covering my #@*:X by trying too make alls well and make it a hap hap happier place............. :D

or were you just jealous cause you were not invited to the group hug?
Title: Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
Post by: Mikekoz13 on August 03, 2009, 05:14:06 AM: I listened to it while atching ARRGGHH's "Wow groovy man" thing in his post. I think I had some sort of flashback....

In all seriousness.... I liked it a lot and the link worked just fine........
Title: Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
Post by: Antimidas on August 03, 2009, 08:31:03 AM: Quote from: Mikekoz13 on August 03, 2009, 05:14:06 AM
I listened to it while atching ARRGGHH's "Wow groovy man" thing in his post. I think I had some sort of flashback....

Reminds me of something I heard over the weekend about Sarah Palin's departure speech sounding like she was narrating her own acid trip. :*)) http://www.huffingtonpost.com/akmuckraker/sarah-palins-farewell-add_b_245215.html
Title: Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
Post by: Mikekoz13 on August 03, 2009, 09:17:30 AM: Quote from: Antimidas on August 03, 2009, 08:31:03 AM
Quote from: Mikekoz13 on August 03, 2009, 05:14:06 AM
I listened to it while atching ARRGGHH's "Wow groovy man" thing in his post. I think I had some sort of flashback....

Reminds me of something I heard over the weekend about Sarah Palin's departure speech sounding like she was narrating her own acid trip. :*)) http://www.huffingtonpost.com/akmuckraker/sarah-palins-farewell-add_b_245215.html

Don't know your political persuasion and frankly it doesn't matter........ I'm just sick and tired of the press beating the sh*t out of her after all this time. What the Hell are they afraid of? She's been done for 9 months now....leave her alone.

The Huffington Post????!! Please..... Arianna Huffington is a far left arm of the far leftists......

Too bad this link was stuffed into Celt's original post about his music. Sorry for the rant Celt, my apologies directly to you.......
Title: Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
Post by: D.A.L.U.I. on August 03, 2009, 09:45:41 AM: #i&@ back to the music, please :x!

I'm frankly not a metal person, but it wasn't bad. Don't resign, keep working on it. >:D
Title: Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
Post by: aarrggh on August 03, 2009, 08:51:37 PM: KEEP ON WRITING > YOUR ON THE RIGHT TRACK <...