Another "Help Me With My Profile" Thread

[timorousme]

http://www.okcupid.com/profile/tim0r0usme

Any tips?

[marty22]

comment: is there a romantic side to u?  Good profile, a tad harsh......M

[timorousme]

Yes. In fact, I'm a horribly hopeless romantic. I'm basically a chick. I cry during movies all the time and whatnot. I'm not sure how to display that without turning girls away thinking that I'm too much of a chick, so I enhanced my masculinity. Though, I guess I may have enhanced it too much.

[TheSlyBear]

You also need a better picture.

[time2shine]

It's a good profile, and it shows your personality and the individual you are.  The links to your work and music is also a good call.  Your standup videos will show them more of your personality, too.
Following up on Bear's comment about the photo; it's a good photo but from first glance, the ladies may think you're trying to hide something; maybe brighten it up.  Although, if the girl were to go to your links, then she would get a better idea of you.  It's your call.
Bottom line, if the right girls watches your vids, and laughs, I think those will seal the deal.

[timorousme]

Thanks a bunch, guys. I still need to actually get a good photo of me. I'll switch it up once I do.

[Brkeatr]

Best of luck to ya Tim !   

[Mikekoz13]

You may want to take out the part about being from West Virgina .... that way your cousins won't be contacting you

Just a joke fellas!!!!

Seriously.... I think your profile does sound harsh. Almost like you're not proud of yourself. You're a comedian my man.... make it funny!!!!

Women love guys with a good sense of humor. Definetly post up a better photo.
And listen here my friend.... real men cry at movies, at things their kids do, and at a whole lot of other things. That doesn't make you any less of a man.
I have a reputation as a pretty tough customer and I cry at all those things.... if anybody makes fun of me I just kick their ass.

Women love guys that are masculine, funny,and that can show their emotions. That my young friend is the formula for successful dating. Oh one more thing.....if you don't talk to them, you can't ask them out. Chat them up!!!

[champ007]

Well, replace this "I'm too lazy to take the time to make good recordings "
With, due to my busy schedule of juggling comedy and acting....
Never admit your laziness, chicks will find out soon enough and let you know about it! 
Not so sure on the feminist statement either... but I'm not a chick!
And your a comedian...where's a little humor to lighten the heart???
Just my opinion 

[nomad]

Well, replace this "I'm too lazy to take the time to make good recordings "
With, due to my busy schedule of juggling comedy and acting....
Never admit your laziness, chicks will find out soon enough and let you know about it! 
Not so sure on the feminist statement either... but I'm not a chick!
And your a comedian...where's a little humor to lighten the heart???
Just my opinion 

ditto