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Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
« on: August 02, 2009, 01:32:02 PM »
I spent all day Saturday at my friend's In-Home studio laying some drum tracks for songs he has written.   While I was there, he offered to let me lay down a track or two for myself.  Here is the one I feel has the most potential.  

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=978940

This is a short two-minute demo of a song I call "Questions".  I laid down all of the instrumentals for this track.  I improvised all the parts around a simple chord progression: only used one take for each, so it's not perfect.  Also, this has very minimal mixing and has NOT been mastered, so it COULD sound a lot better.  

Let me know what you think.  If you guys think it's worth finishing, I'll probably write out some real parts for it and really turn it into a tasty jam.  Please bear in mind that I am a drummer first and foremost  :px , so the guitar parts are by no means amazing.  I could do better if I actually practiced an arranged solo.  
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Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
« Reply #1 on: August 02, 2009, 01:37:47 PM »
 TOO ME IT SOUNDS GREAT !      O0    
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Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
« Reply #2 on: August 02, 2009, 01:47:00 PM »
I'd buy that for a dollar.

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Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
« Reply #3 on: August 02, 2009, 01:49:16 PM »
TOO ME IT SOUNDS GREAT !      O0      B@%d

Glad to know have so much faith in me considering you couldn't even hear the song...  :/O

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Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
« Reply #4 on: August 02, 2009, 01:51:24 PM »
YOUR LINK WORKED ON MY END ! ! !  :/O   :/O   :/O   :/O   :/O   :/O   :/O   :/O   :/O

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Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
« Reply #5 on: August 02, 2009, 01:52:14 PM »
Aarrggh got BUSTED!  :)

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Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
« Reply #6 on: August 02, 2009, 01:57:17 PM »
Something is amiss here.  Now I only see one link in the entire thread.  Hmmm.  Methinks we timed it perfectly after he got approved and heard the song. D#tG3t

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Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
« Reply #7 on: August 02, 2009, 01:59:28 PM »
I think this whole thread should  be deleted and stick too our " BRITNEY SPEARS MUSIC" !!!!!!!!!

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Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
« Reply #8 on: August 02, 2009, 02:01:21 PM »
Ooo!  That was toxic!  :D

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Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
« Reply #9 on: August 02, 2009, 02:14:20 PM »
I think this whole thread should  be deleted and stick too our " BRITNEY SPEARS MUSIC" !!!!!!!!!

Yeah, well... I think we should delete your face.  ^)$$

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Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
« Reply #10 on: August 02, 2009, 02:17:23 PM »
Now boys! kn*%  Make nice.

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Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
« Reply #11 on: August 02, 2009, 02:29:51 PM »
I love that song by BRITNEY SPEARS  ~"Ooops...I did it again" ~ !   Now thats a work of art !    O0


                                                                         

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Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
« Reply #12 on: August 02, 2009, 04:10:58 PM »
aarrggh HUSH!  Song was good dude.  Like I said in your pm  i sent you , I dont think it needs any words.  GREAT JOB!

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Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
« Reply #13 on: August 02, 2009, 04:22:22 PM »
  O`Timmj ~what would we ever do without you--I said it sounded great the rest of the posts were just jibber- jabber--Maybe we can hook up with one of the moderators and arrange some kinda group hug with all who posted here......Whatcha think !............   :-*
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Re: Wrote a new song... Looking for some feedback
« Reply #14 on: August 02, 2009, 05:11:52 PM »
I liked the instrumental. 
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